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i like this video

CondePablo responds:

Thanks!

This cartoon is about a minute of Freezepark trying to set up an actual improv gag while flowjoe just keeps saying whatever comes to mind and effectively ruining whatever Freezepark was trying to execute. This could've been funny if a simple, understandable and well timed improv joke or scene was pulled off but it just wasn't. The animation was a mixed bag, when the cartoon started out there were really nice poses but not too much movement, towards the middle it started looking really good all around aside from a bit of messy line art, but at the end it seems corners were cut or Freeze got a bit lazy, there were simple boring poses and little to no movement. I would've liked to see this idea executed a bit better. It's almost like this was rushed to meet a deadline. I wouldn't feel right rating this any higher than a 2.5.

FreezePark responds:

thx for review bb <3

The animation was pretty limited and there wasn't really much movement aside from the occasional tweening and bouncing. Aside from that the colors weren't very appealing with lots of gross greens and browns and it was pretty bland and yucky.I also don't understand why the audio was the way it was, there was a very strange reverb effect that sounded more like the robots were in a church hall rather than an alleyway. It also wasn't too funny, the humor was all in the improv and the improv itself couldn't carry this cartoon, and it ended very abruptly, there had to have been a better place to end it than that. But I can say that the backgrounds and robot designs were nice.

ColeDawg responds:

Yeah, I had to rush it to get it out on time. I don't feel right for doing so, but whatever. Thanks for the criticism, tho!

Thank you for this.

ZabuJard responds:

:) your welcome, thanks for watching and commenting man

An awful lot of tweens here. But hey pretty cool!

MistyE responds:

Thanks!

Not my sense of humor, and it visually wasn't very great. You did get to the punchline pretty quickly. though, so at least you didn't drag it out.

tonyfamous responds:

This was just a quick idea I wanted to knock out, so animation wise, it was as good as I wanted it to be and there was no real reason for me to try and make this my best work ever. I understand not everybody likes gross or shocking humor, but I do and if it makes me laugh, i do it.

i had nothing to do with those cartoons

Dylan Mann @DylanMann

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