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The animation was pretty limited and there wasn't really much movement aside from the occasional tweening and bouncing. Aside from that the colors weren't very appealing with lots of gross greens and browns and it was pretty bland and yucky.I also don't understand why the audio was the way it was, there was a very strange reverb effect that sounded more like the robots were in a church hall rather than an alleyway. It also wasn't too funny, the humor was all in the improv and the improv itself couldn't carry this cartoon, and it ended very abruptly, there had to have been a better place to end it than that. But I can say that the backgrounds and robot designs were nice.

ColeDawg responds:

Yeah, I had to rush it to get it out on time. I don't feel right for doing so, but whatever. Thanks for the criticism, tho!

I'd say work on posing and frame by frame. The strange proportions and choices when it came to posing made it difficult to tell what I was looking at for the most part. Use a bit less tweens as well, there wasn't too many but I could see some places where a tween was used to cut a corner.

bad animation mixed with interlaced frame rate mmmmmm that's good

dude

amazing animation! dude !

Bad lipsync and it's a video game parody.

This is the best slushie I've ever had!

Perfect length and stunning animation. I really loved this.

Really pretty colors but this isn't too great. There was a deal of poor animation that could've used a bit more time.

Looked pretty good but can't say that the animation was anything special.

i had nothing to do with those cartoons

Dylan Mann @DylanMann

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